Original short fiction – The Story of Khirm

I recently edited (with considerable help from friends) my short fantasy fiction about a kingdom choosing its first monarch. I hope you like it!~~

This is how it all began. When first the need for a king arose, they called the bravest and the cleverest of the land to a war of wit and strength to win the crown. We know that in the end Khirm ascended the throne, but which of these courageous men was he?

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2 Responses to Original short fiction – The Story of Khirm

  1. I liked it a lot! I got a bit lost in the middle around when the priests showed up, but that was probably because I missed that the warriors had been given seven monkeys and not one. It took me a bit of back tracking to set myself right. 🙂 Well done! 🙂

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